Fusion- a mingled flavor mocktail. What
does the first impression say? Well, to me, the book at first glance surely
tells us what the constituents of the best mocktail should be. A blend of
classic 25 spices and condiments, it surely leaves a tangy taste all over the
mouth even after finishing it. Yes, we drink a mocktail by only judging the
garnishing and look of it; the book does its best in the presentation too…
The book begins by adding the first flavor
to the mocktail with Ranuka Vishvanathan’s The Heir. A wonderful start to the
book, this story not only talks about a father and his son but it is also one
eye-opener for the society. A perfect blend of emotions, a bit more
descriptions could’ve made it perfect.
Shreya Kumar’s Dance of life follows the fleet
of wonderful writing in the book. To this story, I am confused what to name it
as, Ayesha’s story or Dr. Pearl’s story? To me, being a girl, this story is a
story for every girl, dutifully giving us another spice in the mocktail and
teaching us the dance of life.
Ayaan Basu, in the Telephone has devotedly
made his way as the third flavor of the mocktail. Talking of a rainy day in
Kolkata, yes, the story made me look outside and cherish the aroma of it. A
perfect idea with perfectly balanced pure emotions, this story surely gives you
a feeling of melancholy as you read it. I particularly loved the story writing
style of the author. A few errors were avoidable.
The book continues with Strings by Mehek
Bassi as its fourth flavor. For me, this story is one of the best stories of
the entire book. The story, about a girl, her deaf and dumb mother and their
connection is something that brought tears in my eyes. Throughout the story I
thought a hundred ways of the meaning of strings in the story, but the end left
me flabbergasted. A wonderful read.
The fifth flavor to the mocktail is Affair
@ online by Neelam Chandra Saxena. The story is mostly a written account of the
cons of trusting each and everyone in social networking sites. It surely is
another tale which would keep the reader engrossed in it till the end f the
story. A more interesting storyline would’ve done the work to make it perfect.
Twilight by Purba Chakraborty gives us the
sixth flavor of the mocktail. The flavor of love. A flavor which remains the same
even after years of distance. Through the tale of Anand and Shalini, the
authoress has done her best in showing this flavor to the readers. A bit more
description was felt the lack of.
The seventh flavor comprises of the The Red
Lahori Dupatta by Paromita Bordoloi. Love in all its shades is the perfect
definition to call a mocktail. In this story, the writer has done her best in
describing what a woman feels when she loses the person she loves. The simple
usage of words and the narrating style with the end brought a faint trace of
tears in my eyes and for everyone it would be the same. A story well told with
precise characters, it has done the best in its work.
Nehali Lalwani through Love- a vague puzzle
gives the mocktail its eighth flavor. If compared to the other flavors of the
mocktail, this story seemed a bit off note. The story was a wonderful one. But
for me, it would be a bit more gracious presentation. Love, in its purest from
being defined here leaves a smile on the faces of the readers.
The ninth flavor is given by Arjun
Pereira’s how to kill boredom, A different story with a different narrating
style, this story keeps the flow going throughout. Though I felt it could’ve
been presented in a better way. This story is a nice-light read.
Swarupa, through unsaid words gives the
mocktail its tenth flavor. Love that wasn’t meant to be. Yes, this would be the
exact way to define the story. The story actually had me thinking of ‘unsaid
words’. The story of Raksha; those unsaid words. A fine narrating style just
added to the experience.
The housewife and the goon by Renu Sethi
form the eleventh flavor of the mocktail. Like the last story, even the story
of Rajbeer was very unique and new retaining the flavor of love. The feeling
inside the story did its best in buying the same in the reader’s heart. A bit
more sharpened from would’ve taken it to be a whole new level.
The twelfth flavor of the mocktail is given
by Heena Ahuja, through slaves of soul. Another very unique tale written in an
interesting way. I personally loved the moral of the story. How good prevails
over evil. The fight was justice and injustice. Though the whole scene could’ve
been articulated a bit, the story is a nice read.
Shalini Katyal, through The Blind Fold,
gives the thirteenth flavor of the mocktail. The blind fold of love, if that’s
what I can term this story. It also has a message of friendship hidden in it.
Showing what blind love can result into, I liked the presentation. A few
mistakes are avoidable.
Manshi Bhateja gives the fourteenth flavor
through Anaesthesia. Akshay and Nikita. What happens when a lonely girl meets
someone on facebook? A girl who never got any ‘male’ support getting sudden
appreciation from a handsome talented young man? You need to read their story
for that. The use of certain words and wrong punctuations couldn’t stop the
story from reaching readers. A job well done.
Ishita Bhown’s The Angel gave the mocktail
its flavor. I believe the story written here could be Kuntal’s could be
anyone’s. A sudden turn of events turning someone’s life upside down. I
personally loved the way writer has written the story. Another eye-opener of a
story. A nice narrating style keeps the reader entertained.
Sixteenth flavor with itself brings Nikhil
Chandwani’s stone cold. I would like to call it the master stroke of the book.
Written in a wonderful way. I actually read and re-read it again and again. The
pain, the feeling is clearly visible in the story. To know what the story is
about, one needs to read the whole thing, for me, penning it down, would be
tough.
Elora Rath surely gives that unexpected
encounter the seventeenth flavor of the mocktail. No matter what the situation
thinks of us. What the situations turn out to be, first love is always the last
love. The story of Ankit and Arnav is an example of one such story. A victim of
circumstances, they had to part ways but what happened next is something the
story will reveal. With very less characters, the story has been well thought
of. A few grammatical errors were avoidable.
The eighteenth flavor of the mocktail is
sprinkled by its forever… Its love by Vinita Bali. Yet another story on love. A
very short and crisp story filled with emotions, I was left wide-eyed at the
end of the story. But something, I felt, was amiss entirely. I guess a bit
described plot would’ve done the trick.
Simplicity by Col.Mahip Chadha gives the
mocktail the nineteenth flavor. In the midst of all these strong stories, this
story was about the Kanchas. One of the simplest people of the place. They
don’t leave their simplicity wherever they go and this story is an account of
just that. I, personally, felt that the story was a tad too simple and could’ve
been written in a better way.
The twentieth flavor is sparkled by
Warishree Pant’s Born under Bad Sign. Homosexuality, a boon or a curse, well
this question keeps with me always. To all ‘homophobic’ people, this story is
an eye-opening. Written in a very sweet way. I admire the writer for taking
such a step and writing about it.
Roshan Kumar, through Play 4 change, gives
the mocktail the twenty-first flavor. Linking politics to music and the concept
of Play 4 change was very innovative. The moral to the story or rather the last
line that music can do all brings a sense of smile on everyone’s lips. I liked
the narrating style but most interesting plot could’ve kept the reader
interested.
The twenty-second flavor is given by
Surabhi Thukral’s this was written. Pain, hurt, regret, love, separation. Yes,
this WAS written. The story of Sarthak and Anu, their lives their friendship
was really nice to watch. Written in a very sweet language a few punctuation
errors were avoidable.
Love, lust and lost by Anjali Vaswani gives
the twenty-third flavor. What happens when business tycoon Viren dies all so suddenly?
Is it a normal death or a well-planned murder? The story is that much more. The
interesting way the story has been written keeps the reader interested. Though
I felt that the ending could’ve been articulated a bit more.
The twenty-fourth flavor will be Will You Cross
the Skies for me? By Neha Zahir. If someone asks me, then for me, the star
attraction in the story was the poem and the writing style. I won’t let out
what is in it, cause for that you got to read it, I can just guarantee you,
this is one of the finest read ever.
The last flavor is sprinkled by Simson
Biswal through his story Menaka- the lost Apshara. A perfect end to a wonderful
mocktail. The end leaves a smile on everyone’s lips. Prostitution, what? And
Why? All answers are answered here in simple words. A wonderful take on the
whole scenario. I loved the way it was written.
Given all the flavors of this wonderful and
taste enriching mocktail, I would like to term this book a Valley. A valley,
because, the definition of a valley suits this book to its best! Uphill,
downhill and then continuing to another uphill. A wonderful start, a very
beautiful end, Collection of beautiful flavors, a bit sharpened stories
could’ve made it just perfect. Almost coming towards the expectations, this
book deserves 3.75 out of 5. Wishing all the contributing writers all the best!
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